ur opinion ?
Posted by assadof1
well english is not my mother language and i am not that good at it but i like
to write in english sometimes, i wrote these stuff based on a real life experience or stories, just be honest when u judge it,
(it's my heart not me)
Everything began? a week ago
everything started
when
she saw me
she met me
she got me
she owned me
she held me
she loved me
she slaved me
everything changed around me
everything became.....different
everything became ....her
then
she's become my mother
she's become my sister
she's become my lover
she's become my twister
she's become my friend
she's become my family
she's become my wife
she's become everything
she's become me
she is the air that I breath
she is the water that I need
she is the moon in my night
she is the mother of my child
she is the sun on my skin
she is the reason for my living
she is the queen of my heart
she is the pupil of the eye
she is the medicine for my pain
she is The light when the darkness fall' in
she is the only thing that I care about
she is the blood in my vein
but
she is far from my vision
she is away from my hand
she is behind the oceans
she is in other land
she is my intoxicant
she is my soul mate
to be continued.......
if she didn't kill me
she is always around
she is most to be a star
she is all what I know
she is nothing I can do
she is the end of my nightmare
she is my guardian angel
she is the one who kills me
So please don't accuse her because simply I am in love with her.
..................................................
(it's Life)
it's life what do u expect it
it's the routen that u can nevert forget it
it's like a tape rolling over and over
it's what make's u feel like a dying rover
it's the sound of tick tuck
it's the reality of u been block
it's the same faces every damn day
it's what people call's sociality
it's fake it's laying and it's pretending
it's a play and the crowd who's acting
it's friends who don't understand friendship
it's familes who lost there relationship
it's money and hate and violence
it's people acting like a virus
it's a captain searching for a land
it's sea swallow everything he can
it's a long search for a mate
it's sacrifices to kept it straight
it's a one chance that u have to find
it's ur future leaking from ur mind
it's L I F and E
it's be or not to be
..................................................
(SHE)
She was part of my life that I didn't knew about
I done everything to find her while she was around
I kept looking for her in the wrong places with perfect guide
And I doubted that she's not even alive
I found many people trying playing her part
But they all couldn't touch my lonely heart
Till a day come's when the live smile to me
Handed me a flower that completed me
In the morning of one seven April
Her sun-shine's on my dying field
That moment where I born again
When our eyes meet and it's all began
I couldn't help my self to hold her tight
I want her to be mine for the rest of our lives
Unfortunately everything was against me to be with her
But nothing will stop me of living this affair
She is everything that I was asking for
That is why that I can't let it go
I came to her and ask her to be mine
And I was afraid of the answer "goodbye"
She ask me to get her own time
To think about it even for awhile
I lived for an hours shaking like a leaf
Terrified like I'm falling in endless cliff
Then she answer's me back with her shying voice
"Yes I want u, yes I do".... how can I don't love u.
..................................................
thank u for reading it to the end even if u didn't like it.
speed freak
to write in english sometimes, i wrote these stuff based on a real life experience or stories, just be honest when u judge it,
(it's my heart not me)
Everything began? a week ago
everything started
when
she saw me
she met me
she got me
she owned me
she held me
she loved me
she slaved me
everything changed around me
everything became.....different
everything became ....her
then
she's become my mother
she's become my sister
she's become my lover
she's become my twister
she's become my friend
she's become my family
she's become my wife
she's become everything
she's become me
she is the air that I breath
she is the water that I need
she is the moon in my night
she is the mother of my child
she is the sun on my skin
she is the reason for my living
she is the queen of my heart
she is the pupil of the eye
she is the medicine for my pain
she is The light when the darkness fall' in
she is the only thing that I care about
she is the blood in my vein
but
she is far from my vision
she is away from my hand
she is behind the oceans
she is in other land
she is my intoxicant
she is my soul mate
to be continued.......
if she didn't kill me
she is always around
she is most to be a star
she is all what I know
she is nothing I can do
she is the end of my nightmare
she is my guardian angel
she is the one who kills me
So please don't accuse her because simply I am in love with her.
..................................................
(it's Life)
it's life what do u expect it
it's the routen that u can nevert forget it
it's like a tape rolling over and over
it's what make's u feel like a dying rover
it's the sound of tick tuck
it's the reality of u been block
it's the same faces every damn day
it's what people call's sociality
it's fake it's laying and it's pretending
it's a play and the crowd who's acting
it's friends who don't understand friendship
it's familes who lost there relationship
it's money and hate and violence
it's people acting like a virus
it's a captain searching for a land
it's sea swallow everything he can
it's a long search for a mate
it's sacrifices to kept it straight
it's a one chance that u have to find
it's ur future leaking from ur mind
it's L I F and E
it's be or not to be
..................................................
(SHE)
She was part of my life that I didn't knew about
I done everything to find her while she was around
I kept looking for her in the wrong places with perfect guide
And I doubted that she's not even alive
I found many people trying playing her part
But they all couldn't touch my lonely heart
Till a day come's when the live smile to me
Handed me a flower that completed me
In the morning of one seven April
Her sun-shine's on my dying field
That moment where I born again
When our eyes meet and it's all began
I couldn't help my self to hold her tight
I want her to be mine for the rest of our lives
Unfortunately everything was against me to be with her
But nothing will stop me of living this affair
She is everything that I was asking for
That is why that I can't let it go
I came to her and ask her to be mine
And I was afraid of the answer "goodbye"
She ask me to get her own time
To think about it even for awhile
I lived for an hours shaking like a leaf
Terrified like I'm falling in endless cliff
Then she answer's me back with her shying voice
"Yes I want u, yes I do".... how can I don't love u.
..................................................
thank u for reading it to the end even if u didn't like it.
:D that was a good read!
Your grammar is way better than Sheepy and Chetons Button's.
Jenson drives it like he owns it; Lewis drives it like he stole it
Your grammar is way better than Sheepy and Chetons Button's.
danm Wrote:
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> :D that was a good read!
>
> Your grammar is way better than Sheepy and Chetons
> Button's.
You haven't set the standards very high, though. :/
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> :D that was a good read!
>
> Your grammar is way better than Sheepy and Chetons
> Button's.
You haven't set the standards very high, though. :/
slow, dull and boring?
RIP Jules, never to be forgotten. #KeepFightingMichael
RIP Jules, never to be forgotten. #KeepFightingMichael
danm Wrote:
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> :D that was a good read!
>
> Your grammar is way better than Sheepy and Chetons
> Button's.
"Trulli was slowing down like he wanted to have a picnic" LOL
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> :D that was a good read!
>
> Your grammar is way better than Sheepy and Chetons
> Button's.
"Trulli was slowing down like he wanted to have a picnic" LOL
ok thank u all
speed freak
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