I read it all... my personal opinion coming up.
It's good to read other people's blogs, it definitely comes across that you have a good knowledge of F1. The only thing I'd say is that your "Silverstone comments" is reminiscent of the reviews-in-brief which most websites already publish. The average F1 fan reading your blog will, chances are, already know what happened in the race, and so it need not be repeated. More opinions, less facts. Because the opinions I haven't heard before, so they're interesting!
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